The Dawn of night

This is the first chapter of my story.

Kiera awoke, where was she? "what? Where did the fox go? I should be dead"she said. Her black fur blew in the nighttime wind. She remembered the last time she was awake. Her mother and father died trying to get her to run away. FOx chased Kiera to the edge of a cliff. She couldnt remember if she had jumped or not. Kiera felt different. She felt cold, but not the normal cold like her soul was cold.
She looked around, she was in the middle of a forest."he..hello?"she called. No one answered. Kiera stood up."You better lay back down"a voice said. A young male wolf stepped out. "you were having spasms while you slept a helaer will be here soon. I would take it easy."Kiera growled."who are you?"she growled. The male laughed,"i'm sorry, my name is Dakota of shadow pack. You are?"Kiera fell to the ground going into another spaz attack.
A few minutes later Kiera awoke. She looked to bein a cave of some sort. A beutiful white wolf looked at her."hello young one, I am glad you have awoken. My name is Mistytear." Kiera shivered feeling the wierd coldness again"ke...keira. My name is Kiera." Mistytear smiled again Her Misty white fur, Kiera noticed, moved like gentle waves in the ocean when she moved around. She saw Dakota walk in. He looked at her but only for a second. "is she alright?"he asked. Mistytear gave her a wierd glance before walking out with Dakota. Keira strained to hear there words. Dakota laughed"well i'm glad. at least she didnt die on us" There was an akward pause."dakota...She was never alive." Kiera gasped, did she hear wight? Of course she was alive, she was here breathing in this room. Then Kiera noticed until she gasped she had not taken a breath once.
Dakota laughed"good one Mistytear, never knew you were one for jokes" He looked at Mistytears face.It was sad and confused"I must admit, I wished it was a joke too but it isnt. The girl is dead, from the coldness of her I suspect she has been dead for at least a night" Dakota couldnt believe his ears"come on, then how is she moving now?" Mistytear shook her head"I have no idea how but she is dead and still moving. Her name she says is Kiera."Dakota thought a moment"Should I tell The alphas?" Mistytear thought a moment."do as you please, she wont be able to leave the mountain for at least a month"said mistytear returning back into the cave.
Kiera stood up"what do you mean I am not alive"she said as soon as mistytear returned. Mistytear was calm"so you overheard?" Kiera nodded. Mistytear took a deep breath"your heartbeat has stopped, your skin and breath is as cold as death itself, and your eyes hold no life in them."Kiera shuddered.Mistytear heard a howl echo through the cavern."My leader needs me, you should rest." Keira watched mistytear leave"I. Am. Dead..."