Friday, June 22, 2007

Names

Yokay I have tons of characters that soo need names. Do you guys think you could help me with this? Just post names for a gamma who is a guy, An alpha male for a pack called frost pack, Two female frost and shadow warriors, 1 male warrior for shadow and frost, 1 babysitter for shadow, and if you come up with good names I could also use some loners too

Wednesday, June 20, 2007

The Dawn of night: part 3

Angel


Kenta

Toros

Kel
Nacierta


Kiera looked at Dakota"really? whats yours?" Dakota stopped"I...I dont exactly know"Kiera looked at him"where to next?"she asked trying to change the subject. Dakota grinned and walked out with Kiera close behind. He led her into another cave"this is the ordinary wolves lair, as I like to call it. He pulled her in quickly"shh. The beta's are coming"he said. One beta was Large and bulky but it was mostly muscle. The other was red with what looked to be a fin on his head."They are Kel, and Toros They arent the nicest wolves around."Dakota whispered.
Dakota was practicly on top of Kiera, she was cold. He shivered. Kiera shifted from underneath him. The beta's left heading into the nursery. "Hey Dakota, it aint mating season just yet"Dakota heard a voice behind him. He lept away. A wolf with Blueish fur and brown legs stood there smiling. "I have to admit she is really pretty lucky you found her first" Dakota heard and akward silence from Kiera. "She aint my mate Kenta!"he growled. Kenta laughed"suuure...angel will HATE this." Once again an akward silence from Kiera. Dakota growled"come on Kiera lets keep lookin' around."
Dakota growled to himself "that Kenta, if there was a prize for most embarasment of your best friend he would win"Dakota whispered to himself. But he had to admit Kenta had a point. Kiera was really pretty, and she would make a fine mate. He could be happy even if she were dead. A voice startled him from his thoughts. "Dakota! I was looking for you" A pretty young she-wolf said running toward him."hey..Angl"Dakota said unsure of what to say. Angel smiled and then she saw Kiera"Who is this?"she said with bitterness. He looked at kiera but she didnt seem to notice."This is Kiera."Dakota said. There was a bark"hey dakota get in here quick!"called kenta. Dakota sighed"be right back"
Angel growled at Kiera when Dakota turned around the corner. "well. So your the new wolfess huh? Well first thing is first. Stay away from Dakota!"she snarled. Kiera looked up with boredom"Why would I want him?" Angel glared"good! I mean..why not! He aint good enough!!? Listen here you Sheika(wolf for B****) get near him and Ill kill you" Keira sighed"I'd like to see you try" ANgel growled"ok then. The battle field is this way...." She snarled running into a large cavern. Wolves stood by the wall ready to watch the fight. Angel smiled"let the battle begin..."

The Dawn of night: part 2

After a day Kiera was allowed to leave the Healers cave. She found out that she was in a mountain. This was Shadow pack territory. Mistytear enjoyed showing her around"Our Alpha Sentor and our alphess Kora qill want to speak to you later"Mistytear said. Kiera nodded. A familiar figure stepped out of one of the caverns. "Hello Dakota"Mistytear called. Dakota turned and walked up to them, his tail wagging slightly. "Hello Mistytear and how...How are you Kiera?" Kiera decided it was okay to speak"I am feeling a lot better and thank you"
Dakota smiled, but just for a second"um, i'll take over Mistytear, Demonpaw got his head stuck between two stalagmites again. Mistytear rolled her eyes"that spaztic pup"she mumbled walking away.
Kiera felt uncomforatable now. She wished Mistytear would come back. Dakota was already down the hallway"are ya comin?"he called back. Kiera turned and followed.
Dakota had an odd pelt. He had grey fur with blue spots on it.A crystal hung around his neck(in the picture) Dakota looked back"so I heard that you know about well...ya know...but Sentor doesnt want this to get out. Only you, me, Mistytear, Kora, and Sentor"he said. Kiera rolled her eyes"wow w thats just about a whole pack right there"she said sarcasticly. Dakota nodded"i guess...have you seen the nursery?"he asked Kiera shook her head.
The nursery was a big cave. About 9 pups ran around playing or sleeping. Dakota let out a small growl and all the pups stopped" okay guys this is Kiera.Key-are-a. "he sounded out. The cubs repeated it. Kiera smiled"hello.."She hadn't even met them yet she loved each and every one of the pups. A small pup with weird eyes walked up. The eyes were blank butdark"your dead..."she said in a small voice. Kiera gasped. How did she know?
Dakota watched nearby. He saw the young pup Nacierta(Nah-see-air-taa) walk up. She was a weird pup almost...scary Her eyes were all black, unlike the other pups which were blue. He heard her speak to Kiera and shivered. The thought always made him shiver. A pup nearby ran past Dakota, he stopped her."Shantii go play with Nacierta"he whispered. The girl looked a little scared"But she is...she is...scary..."Shantii said. dakota knew what she meant.The wolf pup had a weird scary air about her.
Dakota watched as Shantii led Nacierta away from Kiera. Kiera nodded goodbye, which was wweird. He hadn't even seen her shiver. She had a look in her eye as if every pup was her own. He admired this about her, she seemed to love every pup, even Nacierta. He stood beside Kiera. Kiera looked at him and said"how did she know?" Dakota smiled, he had nothing to worry about no one played with Nacierta, she wouldnt tell. "Well...I'm surprised you haven't noticed, but we all have powers.

The Dawn of night






This is the first chapter of my story.

Kiera awoke, where was she? "what? Where did the fox go? I should be dead"she said. Her black fur blew in the nighttime wind. She remembered the last time she was awake. Her mother and father died trying to get her to run away. FOx chased Kiera to the edge of a cliff. She couldnt remember if she had jumped or not. Kiera felt different. She felt cold, but not the normal cold like her soul was cold.
She looked around, she was in the middle of a forest."he..hello?"she called. No one answered. Kiera stood up."You better lay back down"a voice said. A young male wolf stepped out. "you were having spasms while you slept a helaer will be here soon. I would take it easy."Kiera growled."who are you?"she growled. The male laughed,"i'm sorry, my name is Dakota of shadow pack. You are?"Kiera fell to the ground going into another spaz attack.
A few minutes later Kiera awoke. She looked to bein a cave of some sort. A beutiful white wolf looked at her."hello young one, I am glad you have awoken. My name is Mistytear." Kiera shivered feeling the wierd coldness again"ke...keira. My name is Kiera." Mistytear smiled again Her Misty white fur, Kiera noticed, moved like gentle waves in the ocean when she moved around. She saw Dakota walk in. He looked at her but only for a second. "is she alright?"he asked. Mistytear gave her a wierd glance before walking out with Dakota. Keira strained to hear there words. Dakota laughed"well i'm glad. at least she didnt die on us" There was an akward pause."dakota...She was never alive." Kiera gasped, did she hear wight? Of course she was alive, she was here breathing in this room. Then Kiera noticed until she gasped she had not taken a breath once.
Dakota laughed"good one Mistytear, never knew you were one for jokes" He looked at Mistytears face.It was sad and confused"I must admit, I wished it was a joke too but it isnt. The girl is dead, from the coldness of her I suspect she has been dead for at least a night" Dakota couldnt believe his ears"come on, then how is she moving now?" Mistytear shook her head"I have no idea how but she is dead and still moving. Her name she says is Kiera."Dakota thought a moment"Should I tell The alphas?" Mistytear thought a moment."do as you please, she wont be able to leave the mountain for at least a month"said mistytear returning back into the cave.
Kiera stood up"what do you mean I am not alive"she said as soon as mistytear returned. Mistytear was calm"so you overheard?" Kiera nodded. Mistytear took a deep breath"your heartbeat has stopped, your skin and breath is as cold as death itself, and your eyes hold no life in them."Kiera shuddered.Mistytear heard a howl echo through the cavern."My leader needs me, you should rest." Keira watched mistytear leave"I. Am. Dead..."

Memories

I right my own songs too. They aren't GREAT but i think that they are somewhat good.

This is a song I wrote when I was like 7 or 8 so it isn't really my best.

Memories


Why wont you talk to me?
why dont you care?
I hope you still think of me,
even when i'm not there.
Dont you get it?
through all the lies and all the pain,
I still love you.
Fighting like this wont get us any gain.

We used to be such good friends,
Why did it have to end?
I wake up and your not there.
What about all those memories we share?

We die because we live,
and we live but we die.
I know i've nothing to give,
but do you still gotta make me cry?
I keep fighting,
and you keep pushing me away.
But trust me
I'll fight till that very day

We used to be such good friends,
Why did it have to end?
I wake up and your not there.
Hwat about all the memories we share?

ya and then it repeats forgetting the chorus parts then ya repeat the chorus and then ya sing the first four lines nand then end it.

Tuesday, June 19, 2007

Old Demonish

Yo peeps! This is where I am goin' to post my old demonish! It is a language I made up with the help of some people and other languages. Now i had this on a different site but i accidently deleted it before I could paste it on here so my dictionay will be missing words...alot of words...This does not go in order of any kind


Old Demonish Dictionary


  • Wjit-(wih-jit)- Meaning fire or flame
  • Embrahur-(Em-bra-her)or(Em-ber)-Meaning Hell, death
  • Namine-(Nay-mean)-Meaning pure, light; good
  • Sia-(sigh-aa)-Meaning dark, tainted; evil
  • Fassa-(fah-sah)-Meaning ugly, deformed
  • Reshuki-(ra-shew-key)-Meaning girl, woman, girly, feminine
  • Kestaskine-(kah-stock-een)-Meaning man, boy, manly
  • Wldfyare-(Wild-fire)-Meaning-rage, anger,
  • aoshine-(ash-een)-Meaning sadness, cry
  • Kentorea-(ken-tor-ee-ya)-Meaning princess; queen; ruler; emperess
  • Hengaroi-(hen-gor-oye)-Meaning prince; king; ruler; emporer
  • Kento-(ken-toe)-house, cabin
  • Shinga-(sheen-ga)-she-dog, bitch
  • Tetho-(teh-though)-he-dog, sire
  • Dakoetaa-(Dak-ote-aa)-Inique, different
  • Kor-(Core)-Torn

If you guys have any more words to add I would be gald to hear them!